PS to Barry Lane chapter 1-5

I an still ruminating on the first 5 chapters.

I think that I want to practice more with the concept of snapshot and thought shot in my own writing.

I like the idea of mastering each separately and then putting them together, after thinking through where the "pivotal" moment to insert a thought shot is most effective.

I have begun a writing piece that I would like to pursue that combines these two crafts of writing.